Expected Release Date: April 1, 2012
Publisher: Self Published
Imprint: N/A
Author’s Website: carolynjewel.com
My Source for This Book: Gift from the author
Part of a Series: Yes, Book 4.5, My Immortals Series
Series Best Read In Order: Works well as a standalone
Steam Level: Steamy
Official Blurb:
Attorney Lys Fensic has spent her life controlling a psychic power that kills. Her ability to lock herself down falls apart when her ex, a mage, sends enslaved demons to kill her. In a psychic free fall, she turns to tough guy Telos Khunbish for help. But is he a mage as she’s always suspected or is he something far more dangerous?
What Worked For Me:
- I loved Lys’ psychic powers. Not only did it make for an intriguing addition to the storyline, but it gave me a lot of respect for her character as a whole. Anyone who can stay strong enough to leash that much power is worthy of my admiration.
- Telos. Oh, Telos. *fans self* Not only is he a hacker, which I admit, my inner nerd finds sexy as all get-out, but he’s a deliciously powerful shape-shifting demon with both a bit of rebelliousness and an enormous amount of protective instincts when it comes to Lys. I really enjoyed Telos as a hero, and thought he was a perfect foil for Lys.
- Watching Lys crack under stress was so engrossing, and I was literally chewing on my nails worrying over how she was going to make it through the climax of this story.
- The chemistry between Lys and Telos was palpable, and while the love scene may have pushed the envelope a bit for more sensitive readers, I thought that the intensity between the two of them was scrumptious.
- I have to be careful about spoilers here, but the misunderstanding between Lys and Telos towards the end made me grin.
- I really liked how this worked well as a standalone. Now, to be fair, I have read another book in the series about a year ago, so I did remember the basic gist of what was going on. Even so, I think that newcomers to the series will have enough information to keep up, while piquing their interest about the rest of the series.
What Didn’t Work For Me:
- A very minor point, but I was a bit taken aback by some of the dialogue before the love scene. While I know “the talk” is an important and responsible one for new lovers to undertake, this one was a bit much since it included more than just the “protection” discussion. Again, not a big deal, but it did pull me out of the action a bit.
- I do think some readers may be put off by the fact that Telos transforms into his demon form during lovemaking. While it didn’t bother me at all, and therefore did not count against the rating, I do think it’s worth mentioning because it may be a bit weird for some readers.
Free Fall is based on Future Tense, a free short story that is available on the author’s website. Since I had not personally read the original short story, I did read over it before writing this review, and I cannot recommend emphatically enough that readers opt for Free Fall instead. There is so much more emotion, action, romance, and of course, steam, not to mention an actual Happily Ever After in Free Fall than there was in Future Tense.
Newcomers to the series may find a slight moment of confusion in regards to the animosity between mages and demons, but honestly any bewilderment will be quick in passing. I’ve quite literally read over three hundred books since I last read a book from this series, and I was able to easily follow along with the action.
The dynamic between Lys’ very staid, tightly controlled character and Telos’ much more laid back and even aggressive personality was wonderful, and the chemistry between the two was absolutely sizzling.
Overall, I couldn’t put it down. With plenty of action, steam, and powerful romance, this is a wonderful introduction to the series, and a great story in its own right.
A very solid 4.5/5 Stars.
My Immortals Series Reading Order:

- My Wicked Enemy AMAZON | BOOK DEPOSITORY
- My Forbidden Desire AMAZON | BOOK DEPOSITORY
- My Immortal Assassin AMAZON | BOOK DEPOSITORY
- My Dangerous Pleasure AMAZON | BOOK DEPOSITORY
- Free Fall (Novella) AMAZON (Exclusive)






































